高二英语优秀作文讲解

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高二英语优秀作文讲解

  高二英语作文:Difference

高二英语优秀作文讲解

  John and Bobby joined a wholesale company together just after graduation from college the same year. Both worked very hard. After several years, however, the boss promoted Bobby to the position of manager but John remained an ordinary employee. John could not take it anymore, tendered his resignation to the boss and complained the boss did not know how to delegate and did not value hard working staff, but only promoted those who flattered him.

  约翰和博比同年大学毕业后,被同一家批发公司录用。他们二人工作都很努力。然而,几年后,老板提拔博比为部门经理,而约翰还是一名普通员工。约翰再也无法忍受,冲动之下写了一封辞职信,并抱怨老板不会用人,不重用那些敬业的员工,只提升那些奉承他的人。

  The boss knew that John worked very hard for the years. He thought a moment and said, "Thank you for your criticism, but I have a request. I hope you will do one more thing for our company before you leave. Perhaps you will change your decision and take back your resignation."

  老板知道这几年约翰工作确实很努力。他想了一会儿说:“谢谢你对我的批评。但是我只有一个请求,我希望在你离开之前再为公司做一件事情。或许到时你会改变决定,收回辞呈。”

  John agreed. The boss asked him to go and find out anyone selling watermelon in the market. John went and returned soon. He said he had found out a man selling watermelon. The boss asked how much per kg? John shook his head and went back to the market to ask and returned to inform the boss $1.2 per kg.

  约翰答应了。 老板让他去市场找到一个卖西瓜的人。约翰去了并很快回来。他说他找到了一个卖西瓜的人。老板问他每公斤多少钱?约翰摇摇头,回到市场去问,然后又回来告诉老板每公斤1.2美元。

  Boss told John to wait a second, and he called Bobby to come to his office. He asked Bobby to go and find anyone selling watermelon in the market. Bobby went, returned and said, boss, only one person selling watermelon. $1.2 per kg, $10 for 10kg, he has inventory of 340 melons. On the table 58 melons, every melon weights about 2 kg, bought from the South two days ago, they are fresh and red, good quality.

  老板让约翰等一会儿,这时他把博比叫到办公室。他让博比去市场找到一个卖西瓜的人。博比去了,回来之后说:“老板,只有一个卖西瓜的人,每公斤1.2美元,每10公斤卖10美元。这个人一共有340个西瓜,其中58个放在货架上,每个西瓜重约2公斤,都是两天前从南方运来的,新鲜,红瓤,质量好。”

  John was very impressed and realized the difference between himself and Bobby. He decided not to resign but to learn from Bobby.

  约翰受到很大的触动,他意识到自己与博比之间的差距。他决定收回辞呈并向博比学习。

  My dear friends, a more successful person is more observant, thinks more and explores in depth. Chances exist in the daily details. For the same matter, a more successful person sees more and farther so that he can find out an opportunity and catch it to realize his aim. If a person sees one year ahead, while another sees only tomorrow. The difference between a year and a day is 365times, how could you win?

  亲爱的朋友们,成功的人更善于观察,勤于思考和孜孜探求。机遇就存在于生活的细节中。同样的一件事,一个成功的人会看得更多更远。有人看到一年后的情景,而你只看到明天。一年与一天的差距是365倍,你怎么能赢呢?

  高二英语作文的高分秘诀:如何利用细节思维

  试看这样一个题目:The best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  如果要写一段开头,中文思路大致如下:

  人人都想健康,但是,问题的关键是要找到保持健康的最佳方式。对此不同的人提出不同的看法,其中一个看法就是增加体育器材的数量。

  大部分同学写出所对应的英文短文应该类似于以下的`版本。

  常规英文版本:

  Everyone wants to be healthy. But the key issue is to find out the best way to keep healthy. As for this question, different people have put forward different opinions. One of them is increasing the number of sports facilities.

  我们可利用细节思维来重新改写这段话。于是,我们就可以写成以下的版本。

  细节英文版本:

  Being both physically and psychologically healthy is a common wish shared by almost every one. But the core of the matter is to find out the optimum approach to stay sound both in body and mind. When it comes to this issue, different voices can be heard everywhere, one of which claims that the more sports facilities the general public can get access to, the stronger they can be .

  具体分析:

  人人都想健康。“健康”是个概括性的词,我们可以稍微细化分类:身体健康还是心理健康,抑或两个都健康?另外,细节思维显得更客观,毫无疑问,以人开头,似乎有点主观,那就转换思维,将健康放在开头。如:

  Being both phsically and psychologically health is a common wish shared by almost every one.

  第二句话,再次出现“保持健康”,换词后如下:

  But the core of the matter is to find out the optimum approach to stay sound both in body and mind.

  "不同的人"换用“不同的声音”来表达,更细化、更客观;“公众可用的体育器材越多,他们就越强壮”比“通过增加体育器材的数量来保持健康”更为细化。如:

  When it comes to this issue,different voices can be heard everywhere, one of which claims that the more sports facilities the general public can get access to, the stronger they can be.

  当然,细节版本还在句型的多样化方面优于常规版本。

  通过以上分析,我们不难看出,用细节思维写出的文章,更符合英语习惯,更有英文的味道。同学们要想写好英语作问,首先得学会转换思维,也就是要清楚英文用词更细化;其次意思表达要开门见山,不兜圈子;最后要注意重要信息通常前置,无生命词作主语。

  高二英语句子:英语作文万能句型(必背)

  1、the + ~ est + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc)

  the most + 形容词 + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc)

  例句:Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.

  海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。

  Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had seen.

  张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。

  2、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V / Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than sth

  例句:Nothing is more important than to receive education.

  没有比接受教育更重要的事。

  3、cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.(再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。)

  例句:We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.

  我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。

  4、There is no denying that + S + V ...(不可否认的...)

  例句:

  There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.

  不可否认的,我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。

  5、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~ (全世界都知道...)

  例句:It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.

  全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。

  6、There is no doubt that + 句子~~ (毫无疑问的...)

  例句:There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.

  毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。

  7、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子 (...的优点是...)

  例句:An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create (produce) any pollution.

  使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。

  8、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子 (...的原因是...)

  例句:The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air./ The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.

  我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。

  9、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子 (如此...以致于...)

  例句:So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it. 时间是如此珍贵,我们经不起浪费它。

  10、Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V~~~ (虽然...)

  例句:Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. {by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不}

  虽然我们的国家富有,我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。

  11、The more …, the more

  例句:The harder you work, the more progress you make.

  你愈努力,你愈进步。

  The more books we read, the more learned we become.

  我们书读愈多,我们愈有学问。

  12、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~ (借着...,..能够..)

  例句:By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.

  借着做运动,我们能够始终保持健康。

  13、~~~ enable + Object(宾语)+ to + V (..使..能够..)

  例句:Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.

  听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。

  14、On no account can we + V ~~~ (我们绝对不能...)

  例句:On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.

  我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。

  15、It is high time that + 过去式 / should do (该是...的时候了)

  例句:It is high time that the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.

  该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。

  16、Those who ~~~ (...的人...)

  例句:Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.

  违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。

  17、It is obvious that + 句子 (明显的)

  It is apparent that + 句子 (显然的)

  例句:It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.

  可想而知,知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。

  18、That is the reason why ~~~ (那就是...的原因)

  例句:Summer is sultry. That is the reason why I don't like it.

  夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。

  19、Much remains to be done. 还有很多有待于去做。

  Only in this way can we ……. 只有通过这种方式我们才能……

  Sb is to blame for …… 该批某人因为……

  20、be based on (以...为基础)

  例句:The progress of thee society is based on harmony.

  社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。

  21、Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的去做……)

  例句:We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.

  我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。

  22、be closely related to ~~ (与...息息相关)

  例句:Taking exercise is closely related to health.

  做运动与健康息息相关。

  23、Get into the habit of + Ving

  = make it a rule to + V (养成...的习惯)

  We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.

  我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。

  24、Due to/Owing to/Thanks to (因为...)

  例句:Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.

  因为他的鼓励,我终于实现我的梦想。

  25、What a + Adj + N + S + V!

  = How + Adj + a + N + V!(多么...!)

  例句:What an important thing it is to keep our promise!

  How important a thing it is to keep our promise!

  遵守诺言是多么重要的事!

  26、Have a great influence / effect on ~~~ (对...有很大的影响)

  例句:Smoking has a great influence on our health.

  抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。

  27、do good to (对...有益),do harm to (对...有害)

  例句:Reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益。

  Overwork does harm to health.工作过度对健康有害。

  28、Pose a great threat to ~~ (对...造成一大威胁)

  例句:Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.

  污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。

  高中英语语法-英语说明文的写作方法(一)之二

  ay,the first paragraph sets up the topic focus(主题所在)Next,the sentences in the body of a paragraph develop the topic sentence. Similarly,the body of an essay consists of a number of paragraphs that discuss and support the ideas given in the introductory(引导的)paragraph. Finally,a concluding sentence(结束句)——whether a restatement,conclusion,or observation——ends the paragraph. The essay,too,has a concluding paragraph which ends the essay logically and satisfactorily. Although there are some exceptions(例外),most well written expository(说明文的)paragraphs and essays are similar in structure.

  可以看出,在比较相同点的时候,常用到similarly,also,too,in the same case,in spite of the difference等这样的词语。

  European Football and American Football

  Although European football is the parent of American football,the two games show several major differences. European football,sometimes called association football or soccer,is played in 80 countries,making it the most widely played sport in the world. American football,on the other hand,is popular only in North America(the United States and Canada).Soccer is played by eleven players with a round ball. Football,also played by eleven players in somewhat different positions(位置)on the field,is played with an elongated(拉长的)round ball. Soccer has little body contact(接触)between players and therefore needs no special protective equipment. Football,in which players make the greatest use of body contact to stop a running ball-carrier and his teammates,needs special protective equipment. In soccer,the ball is advanced toward the goal by kicking it or by butting(顶)it with the head. In American football,on the other hand,the ball is passed from hand to hand or carried in the hands across the opponent's(对手)goal. These are just a few of the features which distinguish(区别)association and American football.

  这是一篇用比较不同点的手法写的说明文。从文章中可以看出:however,on the other hand,in contrast,but,nevertheless等表示转折的词语常用来引导对不同点的比较。

  高中英语作文:万能英语作文模板(二)

  模块(3)

  For most of us today ,( 1 ).

  From above ,we can find that the reasons

  why ( 2 ) are as follows.

  The primary reason ,i think, is ( 3 ).

  Second,( 4 ).

  The third reason, actually ,is ( 5 ).

  The significance for ( 6 ) 。

  Therefore ,( 7 ).

  注释:

  (1)人们针对XX的态度和举措

  (2)归纳现状

  (3)第一个原因

  (4)第二个原因

  (5)第三个原因

  (6)重申造成现状的最重要原因

  (7)我的建议我写的模块

  (3)的相应的作文,仅供参考

  Pollution

  most of us today (recognize that environmental pollution has been a greatly serious problem . lots of plants trees corps are destroyed by bad air .many fish die of poisonous water . thousands of people die from eating poisoned fish or breathing in gas . therefore , environmental pollution should be responsible for these diseases

  that are disabling ,or bringing death not only to human beings , but also to wild life .)

  from above ,we can find that the reasons why (environment are polluted more and more seriously) are as follows.

  The primary reason ,I think , is (the reason of harmful substances into environment . for example ,to prevent insects ,farmers make use of great amounts of insecticides, so as to have bumper harvests . however ,they pollute air ,water and land ).

  Second,(the gas coming from the car engines and factories also make environment polluted badly ).

  The third reason actually is (the result of a growing population in the world.

  Everyday , so much litter and waste are poured out from houses ,also pollute the environment ).

  The significance for (controlling pollution ) noted that it’s high time that more effective measures should be taken .

  Therefore ,(new laws should be passed to limit the amount of pollutants from factories . moreover ,in the households ,there is an obvious need to reduce litter and waste . let’s make our good efforts ,and the world will be a safer place to live for us ).

  模块(4)

  These days we often hear that ( 1 ).

  It is common that ( 2 ).

  Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social

  protects? For one thing ,( 3 ).

  For another,( 4 ). What is more,

  since ( 5 ),it is natural that ( 6 ).

  To solve the problem is not easy at all ,but is worth

  trying .We should do something such as ( 7 )

  to improve he present situation ,and i do believe everything

  will be better in the future .

  (1)提出论题

  (2)说明现状

  (3)理由一

  (4)理由二

  (5)理由三

  (6)理由三引起的后果

  (7)解决方法

  我写的模块(4)的相应的作文

  pollution of environment

  These days we often hear that (our living conditions are getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment ).It is common that (many trees and animals are near extinction, and the all-important food chain has been destroyed .).

  Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing ,(the population of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded. ).For another,(the overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology ). What is more , since ( the industrial revolution ) ,it is natural

  that (a great number of factories have been springing up like mushrooms .The smoke and harmful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment ).

  To solve the problem is not easy at all ,but is worthying .We should do something such as (planting more trees , equipping cars with pollution-control devices and learning to recycling natural resources )to improve the present situation ,and i do believe everything will be better in the future .

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  高二英语作文100字范文(附中文):football 足球

  Football is the most popular ball in the world. More and more people like watching football matches. They can’t sleep or eat when their teams are playing.They shout for their players. I think many Chinese football player have done better match after match since the Professional Football league of China was set up. But we still have a long way to go to Asia and to the world. We should learn from foreign teams. Foreign players and coaches must be invited. Dalian Wanda, Shanghai Shenhua and Guangd0ng Apollo are among the best.

  足球是世界上最流行的球类运动。现在越来越多韵人喜欢看足球比赛,当他们的球队参加比赛的时候,他们可以废寝忘食地为他们的队员加油。我认为自从中国足协建立以来,许多中国足球的比赛踢得一场比一场好了。但是我们的足球要冲出亚洲、奔向世界还有很长的路要走。我们应该向国外的球队学习,邀请一些外国的运动员和教练到我们中间来。大连万达、上海申花、广东太阳神都是最出色的球队。

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